Poetry often begins with a metaphor...

or a simile. A simile compares 2 or more things using "like" or "as" while metaphor compares things without using "like" or "as".
She's as beautiful as a rose. Is a simile, comparing a woman to a rose, two rather different things, but similar in their beauty.
Her beauty, a rose. Is a metaphor, not saying she's like a rose, but saying her beauty IS a rose.
An exercise for you to try out, using metaphor or simile.
Choose an emotion; happiness, sadness, love, hate, etc.
and choose an object; soccer ball, laptop, notebook, park, etc.
Start a poem with "[Emotion] is (like) a [object]" and write a few lines to explain how they're similar. Use like or as for a simile, or omit those for a metaphor and directly say the emotion IS the object. It may take a bit of thinking to get some ideas of how the two share some similarities. You can add more information to sell the similarities. Happiness is a box of popsicles...on a hot summer day. The time of year adds more detail and allows me to add something like ...gone too soon.
Here's some examples I cooked up.
Love is a waterfall
beautiful from a distance
but up close
it will drag me down
and drown me
Or
Hate is like a rock
I carry it with me
to throw and those who
need to be punished
I hold this rock long
after they're gone
Feel free to experiment with this prompt, and see what you come up with. Post your poems in the comments if you like.
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